Well it's a shame you couldn't finish this because I really liked what I saw!
The writing was solid, the art is beautiful, and the movement feels nice and snappy. Even the combat was kinda interesting with having to point and shoot like System Shock or an arcade shooter.
And maybe it's just me but the inventory management and the look of the UI feels kinda reminiscent of Metal Gear Solid, which is a positive imo.
I know the pain of not finishing an entry on time, my submission in 2023 only had a tutorial level and a couple cutscenes. So I don't know if you plan to finish this post-jam or not, but I think you have a solid base for either finishing this game or a future one!
Good work!