Writing was definetely the best part of this entry. I enjoyed reading the text but the full screen reading made it a bit of a hassle because you had to scan your whole screen with your eyes. Maybe halve the text size of the large text.
I would say the whole gameplay part of this entry needs some work, there was not a lot of game to the game, which it seemed to imply there would be. Why train your stats when they are not used for anything?
I do like the collection of minigames angle though, nothing wrong with that.