It did seem like there was more to them in the bonus stuff log, so it is unfortunate how the ending came off. As I mentioned, I don't have a problem with that kind of alter, they are real and deserve to be represented too, I think the portrayal was mainly hurt by the smaller scale of the game. With an alter that only appears briefly, the player only gets to see the character at face value. Even the mentioned scene isn't necessarily unrealistic, mainly just the dramatization combined with existing stereotypes that hurt it. If one or the other wasn't there, it probably would have felt better. If the game continued after that event I am curious where it would have gone and if my opinion would change, but of course that is beyond the scope of the project.
I do think it was overall quite well researched, I appreciate the game and it had me smiling the whole way through. In fact, if you ever write another plural character or do more with this one and would like a second opinion, I would be open to helping out. Thanks for the reply!