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"He wasn't beaten, he wasn't really emotionally abused, he wasn't harassed or bullied by people around him"

I have to remind you that you are currently reviewing an Ongoing game, it is far from being completed.

Therefore, such assumptions like the one I've quoted from you are factually wrong. You haven't met his dad yet, nor seen any portion of MC's past yet except for Anna and Alice.

In my humble opinion, I think you're writing way too much on the only aspect of the game which cannot be objectively criticized due to the game being currently in devlopment.

I suggest you don't dwell on this aspect too much as long as you don't have all the elements.

Of course there is always the "Well it hasn't been introduced yet" but that's a bit of an escape for what exist and what is written and visible now because yes you are correct in that I am focusing on something that isn't fully fleshed out and has much more context and story that is needed to be added to better understand, but as that isn't here nor will it be here for x amount of time I will go based on what is here and what I see as of now. It's a similar crux of  (since it's May the 4th) Watching the original Trilogy of Star Wars and looking into Darth Vader's character and judging him for what he is then and there. 
Of course there's the prequels, there's the cartoon clone wars series, the books, the comics and all that that later helps flesh out why Vader is the way he is and all the hardship he went into. 
But if it was just with what was available at the time? Vader wasn't very much of a fleshed out character, he was just a subservent whiny angry man.

So yeah i'm not making this out to be something like I'm already cemented who this character is and that nothing would change my mind on it, I've stated in the previous Review and my earlier comment that I can see that there is much more there that you probably have in the works and that the character itself does seem to be whats the word. "Amending?" His current treatment of people
Just that from what is here that's how i see the guy. And once this game is fully released I'll do another review for that once im able to fully see this character from A to Z and see if I end up recorrecting any of my previous points

Ok, well, huh, it was an interesting exchange at first.

Thanks for your feedback, see ya mate.