No worries The music was something that Admittedly did kill some of the vibe and how often I was asked to raise the volume up, expecting for something to happen just to get hit with a musical segment was. It was interesting to say the least xD
But I do know what ya was going for it just wasn't my taste, could defin be others tho
And Yeah Personally I just had some issues with the Mc since it really made it look like he was supposively had gone through so much to hate the world and everyone in it but, all he really was at the end of it was neglected. He wasn't beaten, he wasn't really emotionally abused, he wasn't harassed or bullied by people around him, cheaten on nearly killed nothing. So for him to be going around like what is basically a Emo Kid with a chip on his shoulder saying that the world owes him and that everyone in his life is at fault for his ruined childhood it just really bring up to mind those types of people that go "I have a problem and now it's going to become everyone's problem" And the types that go "Well yeah? I got hurt 15 years ago so fuck you"
Granted that could be exactly the character he is and what you are going for as I stated in the review and will again that He DOES call himself out and catch himself when other people really push it into his head that he's just going too far for absolutely no reason. Like his interactions with Nina, The blond goth girl and so forth. But it does end with him usually some how justifying to himself that he's just treating people the way he's owed to.
But yeah no real reason to really edit it in anyway since it is your story and if that's how you planned on writing the character (which i believe to be the case since again, you made very clear callouts to how he is) that's honestly perfectly fine!
Not everyone needs to agree or even like a character even if they are the Protagonist. Nina is a very beloved character and im sure there are people out there that Hate her just as well as people that Agree completely with everything the Protag is doing. So just keep doing what you gotta do because it is very much working I've pretty much completely done everything that is to do with this update and I only ever had that one bug that was mentioned with Needing to go to your Discord to get the fix. Didn't see no real Typos or bugs or glitches so its a very well polished game
"He wasn't beaten, he wasn't really emotionally abused, he wasn't harassed or bullied by people around him"
I have to remind you that you are currently reviewing an Ongoing game, it is far from being completed.
Therefore, such assumptions like the one I've quoted from you are factually wrong. You haven't met his dad yet, nor seen any portion of MC's past yet except for Anna and Alice.
In my humble opinion, I think you're writing way too much on the only aspect of the game which cannot be objectively criticized due to the game being currently in devlopment.
I suggest you don't dwell on this aspect too much as long as you don't have all the elements.
Of course there is always the "Well it hasn't been introduced yet" but that's a bit of an escape for what exist and what is written and visible now because yes you are correct in that I am focusing on something that isn't fully fleshed out and has much more context and story that is needed to be added to better understand, but as that isn't here nor will it be here for x amount of time I will go based on what is here and what I see as of now. It's a similar crux of (since it's May the 4th) Watching the original Trilogy of Star Wars and looking into Darth Vader's character and judging him for what he is then and there.
Of course there's the prequels, there's the cartoon clone wars series, the books, the comics and all that that later helps flesh out why Vader is the way he is and all the hardship he went into.
But if it was just with what was available at the time? Vader wasn't very much of a fleshed out character, he was just a subservent whiny angry man.
So yeah i'm not making this out to be something like I'm already cemented who this character is and that nothing would change my mind on it, I've stated in the previous Review and my earlier comment that I can see that there is much more there that you probably have in the works and that the character itself does seem to be whats the word. "Amending?" His current treatment of people
Just that from what is here that's how i see the guy. And once this game is fully released I'll do another review for that once im able to fully see this character from A to Z and see if I end up recorrecting any of my previous points