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Tried this out but it was extremely rough in many ways. I stopped once I walked around and the only thing I could find to do was go into the caves an dungeon, but since I had no skills I just died to encounters, meaning there was no way to progress.

I'll take a wild guess that this is an early newbie project and that the developer isn't great with English.

  • Dialog and text was VERY rough and shoddy. No punctuation, no capitalization, nonsense grammar. Even if you're not good at English having ANYONE take a simple go through it to fix the worst would have been a great improvement.
  • Resource use was rough, maps were poor, dark for no good reason and empty.
  • As stated there was nothing to do. Exploring yielded nothing, and combat was impossible with no skills at all. 
  • Sometimes maps will ask if you want to enter/leave, sometimes not. Entering a dungeon means you cannot leave where you came from for no explained reason.
  • There is no clear aim or signposting of what I'm meant to be doing. I assume get a job or money, but no one was offering anything. 

Overall would need a lot of work.

Thanks for the feedback ill look into that. Unfortunately i understand that with my rough english i have dyslexia