Cool idea! I love the Lovecraftian vibes. I might recommend, on a spread like this, not stretching the text all the way across the page. At least for my ADD addled brain it makes it tricky to read. I also quite like the art, it’s suitably dreary and really evocative of being deep underwater.
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Thanks for the feedback!
I was experimenting with the layout because... well... Mork Borg, but I can see your point on there. I am glad that you liked the imagery; they are just some images I found on Old Book Illustrations that I edited in GIMP, but I'm happy with the results.