That was creepy my gosh, I was so focued on the half open closet that I totally didn't expect that panning to the left. The VA did such a great job making it sounds like an everyday conversation with that funny youthful accent. I do think that at the ending it would be nice to hear more strangling noises as the camera panned to poor Roach but aside from that I found it really captivating!
I like how the MC subtly kept fishing for information, I wonder if that information was taken from Roach and as Rosario kept talking to MC the transferance of information from his soul just came to MC. I wonder if it'll extend as some sort of telephone game with each victim because that would be terrifying and more psychological horror than the usual thriller slasher horror you can see decorating Roach's room.
Amazing job with this one!