Hey, thanks. I'm glad you mostly enjoyed it. 23 Sisters was my first time writing anything outside of a classroom which was a long time ago. I've gotten much better. You can tell with my current projects Extra Credit, which is kind of a prequel to 23 Sisters about Abere the Demon, and Tomboy Supremacy which has the insanity of 23 Sisters but is very much based in reality outside on character having mental problem. You can find both here on Itch. The storytelling is much more organized .