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I just finished the game and I felt like I needed to write a comment. First of all, wow, your mind is weird, but in a good way. There were a few times when I wanted to stop playing because the story is kind of effed up. However, it did keep me coming back and although towards the end you seem to be completely "losing it" and it becomes quite ridiculous and nonsensical, I must admit that I enjoyed it nonetheless. I mean, it's kind of obvious that you were struggling to find a solution to a more and more confusing plot in order to give us a conclusion (and at that time I was reading and clicking fast because my brain couldn't take the insanity of it anymore), but I am still happy I played until the end.

All in all, I commend you for sticking with it until the finish line and not giving up - and definitely giving the player an extremely unique and at times hilarious experience.

I hope that didn't sound too negative, because I did, in fact, enjoy your game. So keep up the work!

Hey, thanks.  I'm glad you mostly enjoyed it.  23 Sisters was my first time writing anything outside of a classroom which was a long time ago.  I've gotten much better.  You can tell with my current projects Extra Credit, which is kind of a prequel to 23 Sisters about Abere the Demon, and Tomboy Supremacy which has the insanity of 23 Sisters but is very much based in reality outside on character having mental problem.  You can find both here on Itch.  The storytelling is much more organized .  

Alright, sounds good. I guess I will start with Extra Credit next month.

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