Excellent visuals! They definitely steal the show! The gameplay is enjoyably subversive as well, especially since I had to fight against my own instinct of wanting to fight a conventional battle. The writing was fun, though I did notice a few typos which brought me out of the experience somewhat.
Something funny to note is that it seems like there is an autosave already in the downloadable game folder. It takes the player immediately to the end credits, so I guess I can boast that I technically beat the game in about 2 seconds!
I will mention that I would have liked more control over when I could save, though I do realize it isn't that difficult to make up lost time by simply holding Enter to speed through repeated text. Overall, it was a solid entry!