The sound track is nice and makes a very good background to the play. Good work.
Interesting idea of having an island nation for Uni. A placement near Hawaii would fit Uni well. So, you did your world building job successfully.
I very much appreciate the Nathan route. He's sweet and not creepy. While I still like Damian, I think I like Nathan more. Thank you for adding him.
BTW, I can easily imagine talking with a RL version of Madison asking me how I got Nathan to date me. My answer would be "You pointing out to us what a good couple we would be. Thank you very much."
My thought on a possible strip club route is that is would be a middle ground between a normal job and the bar's prostitution. The RL club I worked treated us well. The owner was an MBA graduate of the same university I attended and was very supportive of the students who worked for her. As for any questions of age restrictions, the customers had to be 21+, but the dancers/strippers only 18+. This was because the owner didn't want to worry about serving alcohol to underage customers but did not, for safety reasons, allow the dancers/strippers to partake alcohol - not even the 21+ ones. (One 22yr old I know of was fired for drinking alcohol while on duty.)