Ah, I enjoyed this! That introduction with the glitched text and the robotic voices was EXCELLENTLY done.
The writing was also great. Blythe is a really engaging character. The scene confronting the dad after coming home was so tense, I literally had to take a breath when we made it to the room (the animation of Blythe just resting against the door and falling to the ground fit the mood perfectly). It sucks that you didn't get to finish the story, but I'd definitely tune in for more!