There is no need for total rewrite just need editing adding some more flair, description and polishing some page, like there is noticable typo so far, this whole early chapter could surpass 100k word if you let it bloom.
I'm not talking about rewriting the entire stories, but the scenes I can add some more content and make it more immersive.
I see, excited to read what you will add.
Keep in mind to balance writing and real life, most author can't balance this causing burnt out which is sad because they wrote good stories :(
Anyway good luck😁
