I really enjoyed how you paced your soundtrack, with how the individual track structures were paced and also with how the entire soundtrack is structured to connect and explore various tones. I like the experimental bits as well! I am pretty bad at identifying motifs sometimes, I can identify the piano one you've used in "Dreaming in Sun" with a different version in "Break through Reality", but I am curious to know where else you had the other motifs placed?
Overall, I think you've explored the theme incredibly well here and the soundtrack was an enjoyable journey! Nicely done!