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All of these are valid criticism, and most of them I've heard in some form once or twice before. I'll keep them in mind when writing the next thing. Thanks for your feedback! I can't improve as a writer without lovely people like you pointing out where the flaws are. I hope you enjoy what I make in the future as well.