Now that I played Olivine Lights, I can appreciate just how great this game is. A lot of love went into the whole affair, and it really shows. You're very skilled at telling a kinetic story. It's impressive.
Critique now. I think the dialogue comes across a little bit like the MC bouncing ideas off himself at times because everyone is a little snarky. Marnie's personal troubles are where her writing is at its best.
I also wish more of the map adhered to Kalos. I loved Prism Tower and Lumiose Station. It didn't seem quite necessary to drop the Louvre and Les Invalides in, especially when they weren't poke-fied. Something about XY's plot could've improved it.
I look forward to playing the next one.