The writing was chilling, kept me very engaged while reading about this dying world. The setting as a whole was great, I love the bleeding and red iconography and the other parts of this world feel right out of the Tolkien novels. I did have some trouble triggering prompts in the intro and harder stages but overall the system felt satisfying, The Excess system was not only innovative but each affect in it was interesting and unique. It made for something intriguing to work around. can't wait to see this world and game expanded.