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Hi.

Nice early premise, great graphics. The plot is very standard but well presented, organic. 

Maybe some inconsistency when she's applying for jobs, the mother offering the tutoring job mentions Layla should go meet her as soon, yet that only happens two days later? This is just nitpicking, really, but maybe alter the dialogue, include some time reference to make it easier to understand.

Looking forward for the next updates.

Thank you!