I was surprised at how interested and entertained I got into this, loving the whole setting and exploration this game has. My only two suggestion is that there should be
1) more gradual buildup to some scenes cause it was kind of a jarring jump to go from having her be a bit flustered and uncomfortable from the swimming pool scene in the mansion level and then her just calmly dealing with three salvors at once a few levels later. Then again I've always been a sucker more for the long gradual corruption of a character instead of them being all gung-ho right off the start.
2) Like another person who commented I'd like see the pool scene in the mansion level be able to go a couple steps further upon repetition cause besides being a great scene that level feels like it be great to showcase her descent ;) into all this and be perfect for one-on-one scenes in different parts of that map.
Either way I really enjoyed this game and am interested to see where you take this!