Okay, so I don't have any major complaints for this version of the story. I like the story so far, how the characters were introduced as well as their interactions. You introduced a lot more mystery into this story compared to your other ones which is appreciated.
The only things I could really think of are how the music would sometimes cut out and I would have to load back in to get the music back. When you choose your abilities, I assumed that it locks you out of choosing the other options in the story and yet I was able to pick options other than the abilities I picked. I know this is the first installment, but some of the background images look like pictures taken and others look like their ai-generated, not a major concern it just breaks immersion a little. My only other complain is THE ABSOLUTE LACK OF SHIN CONTENT!!!!!!! My disappointment was immense, and my day was ruined. JK, I just hope that she shows up in the next version.
The only suggestions I have are to touch up some of the background images if you're choosing to keep them and to fix the abilities issue if it is indeed one.
Other than that, I was wondering something, I know that some of these girls have a penis, and yet the lack of a bulge absolutely confounds me. It just makes no sense to me, like, where are they hiding it? In a magical pocket dimension? Does it only show up when it's convenient? I would appreciate it if the girls who have a penis look like they have one. The skintight bodysuits should make it obvious. My only other hope for this story other than all the things I listed on Patreon, is that if I choose not to pursue a character it will have an impact on the story. I guess what I'm saying is that I don't want a skip button. If I choose not to pursue a character, I actually want to be locked out of those characters NSFW content. I don't want to be able to have sex or pursue a romantic relationship with a character if I've been snubbing them for 3/4 of the game.
Thank you for reading my feedback and I hope I get a response to this.