man, i would've loved to see how much further you could've developed "Sir Crow" (of course, you can always keep working on it AFTER the jam......); i really enjoy the usage of harpsichord and guitar for a clashing set of instrumentation that makes for a fascinating vibe. i think the track stands out from what "Outside" sounds like, BUT it adds an overall sense of whimsy and lightheartedness to your videogame concept which could work if you choose to run with it! >:3
i'm glad someone else mentioned Look Outside because that game achieves an oppressive atmosphere while still carrying hopefulness and other positive themes. ^^