"As stated in a comment below this one, You (The main character) are a bit too horny with comments"
The first version had no real thoughts/internal dialogue from the MC, and compensating for that, I may have overdone it slightly.
"...and while comedy is good in keeping the mind from reeling into insanity and helping to keep a firm ground under the feet, it feels...a little too forced and obfuscating(bewildering)."
Noted. It can be a difficult balance. The horrific things should be horrific, not a joke. The jokes should be realistic interactions that real people might have, even in harsh circumstances.
The psychedelic scene gave me a good idea of what it is like to be drugged, even though I never want to experience that personally.
I draw from personal experiences, although I have never been unwillingly drugged by someone else, and I hope that never happens!
I do suggest putting a content warning in the game for the rape scene, or at least having the option to remove it if people don't want to see it in the options.
I will be doing something about it. It's rough!
But i feel it's placed well, and doesn't overstay it's welcome too long."
Good to know.
"I cannot wait for the next update for chapter two to finish out so we can see chapter three. I figure you might be just one person working on a passion project, but you are doing an amazing job."
I'm glad to hear that :)
Before I'd even written anything, I had a vision for chapter 3. I'm personally curious about how I'll manage to realise it, if that makes sense.
"And I leave with a singular question about Sam: Are all his sprites and animations done with motion capture? He looks like vtuber model."
Motion capture is what would have been necessary previously. But no - it was done with prompting (so AI), and a lot of trial and error+patience.
Thank you so much for your kind words and your positive rating - it really helps me out :)