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A Wall Too Tall has some wonderful orchestration off the bat. I love how each section is introduced before being stripped down to the essentials. There's some great storytelling in this piece - it feels very pensive with a sense of longing to it, thanks to the voicings and chosen progression. The woodwinds coming in more notably toward the end of the track does a great job of really leaning into said longing. The percussion feels a little understated in comparison, but I'm sure that's by design.

What I Deserve is gorgeous. The core melody with the emphasizes beat note supported is clever and a great way to really have it stick out. The percussion here is a little busier at points and more present in the mix, adding a nice pulse to the movement as it progresses. 

A Life Left Behind starts nice and slow, taking its time to develop with a strong choice of leading voice here. Not quite lullaby sounding, but pensively quiet - if that makes sense. The strings are subtle and add just a hint of much needed sustain to connect each passage together and tie in the root to keep things coherent. 

Great work, this was fun to listen to and as a whole all sounded very cohesive. I could envision this in a couple of different games in all honesty. Good job!

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Thank you so much for the descriptive feedback, I appreciate that so much more than you could imagine as I'm still a bit of a newbie. It gives me a much needed perspective and way to better describe to others and interpret my own music. Your comment about percussion definitely won't go unnoticed. It's a big weak spot in my skills thus far, and this just goes to show I've got to invest time into rectifying that! Thank you again ^^

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That's the beauty of these jams - it affords an opportunity to really put yourself out there on a smaller scale and get some decent feedback. Your tracks were a delight to listen to all in all, and my only real criticism is how buried in the mix the percussion was in the first track specifically. An easy fix! Thank you for sharing your work, and best of luck later today!