This is absolutely wonderful. As someone who often makes my work dripping and neon, I often have to dull Chorogaiden works down to fit a colour scheme. The Eyes Are Watching has brought it back into a wonderful static world and is expertly written.
Each new mechanic you bring feels like it was always part of the Chorogaiden world and I especially love the concept of glitches. Keeping players on their toes even when they succeed is something I've always loved I'm my RPGs and the idea of the world shifting constantly is front and foremost in Chorogaiden, glitches captures this excellently!
Fantastic work and look forward to running this in my own Chorogaiden games!
The Eyes are watching...