Great work!
I love to hear a track fully utilising the guitar. Love the tone on the background guitar, it really gave a punch to the whole feel.
I also like your use of rythm in the melodies, espessially when the triplets hit at 1:30 and the melodic line after 2:00
The track could have been better mixed, the lead guitar didn't really have the punch it deserved. Maybe if you double tracked it or raised it's volume, that would help.
Otherwise, a really great composition, and it's really impressive that you improvised a lot of this.
It was a treat to listen to!
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