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Hello! I'll elaborate a bit more on my feedback:

  • There's nothing wrong with including safety and consent in fantasy—it's actually great! I'm sure a lot of people will appreciate it. The game is very wholesome in its own way, so that's really cute.

  • I think it's fine if we just call it roleplay; it doesn't have to be a literal slave situation.

  • The "flip over" thing is a minor detail, but I just wanted to mention it.

  • If it were up to me, I would add an option to let the player choose whether they want it or not. You could store that choice in a variable and then adjust the scene slightly based on their selection using an if statement.

I wish you the best of luck on your game dev journey! Also, Deltarune is great.

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oooooooooooooo, thanks for the variable tip! i'm still pretty new to Twine, so i didn't know that was something you could do!

and i'm very excited for the upcoming Deltarune chapters slated to release later this year :D that being said, i've had Ralsei as a profile picture for years because i just haven't gotten around to making my own yet lol