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hello! here are my thoughts:

  • REALLY cool concept and visuals! i especially love how the options change depending on what you've already been through, that's dope!
  • it might be worth including a warning about the incest with your cousin; i don't currently see one on the game page's "Content" list
  • i like how different the designs are for the girls! and how they lean into the bug motif
  • when you tell your cousin "You're still you", the color of the text is pink as if she said it. most of the player character's dialogue is white, so i thought i'd point this out in case the pink was accidental
  • the UI is very nice and adds a lot imo
  • i also really like the Praying Mantis "but that feels like such a waste" line; nice! i was wondering if that would come up, and i'm pleased that it did
  • it's also neat how you can "Try Again" from where you just were (as opposed to starting the entire story over). it's very convenient for getting all the endings :D

great job!

Thank you! I really appreciate your feedback, and I'm glad you liked it.

  • You're right — I'll add the incest warning. Since the harem tag was already there and it was mentioned in the girl's description that she was your cousin, I thought it would be fine, but I should add it anyway.

  • Good catch! The "You're still you" was definitely a mistake on my part—thanks!