thank you so much for sharing your personal journey AND your music, i appreciate your vulnerability in doing this for a jam!! i love the storyline that you chose to represent and symbolize with your piece, the uplifting instrumental palette works well for it. i think the piano ostinatos metaphorically work well for bugs and birds taking flight! ^^
the bass strings coming in to increase the intensity of the arrangement are lovely... to me this currently represents the resolution that you've already reached. lovely job!