hm, i can't figure out which one is my favorite track of the two... the constant key changes (?) in "The Rest of Me Can't Fly" are so delectable in the way they continuously keep my attention and suggest the storyline and cinematic nature of a possible cutscene. "Sunset City" was a pleasant surprise with the choice of almost uplifting and heroic string motifs, with the saxophones beautifully countering that with melodic lines that hint at the protagonist's struggle.
i think it'd be exciting to get even more intense sections in "The Rest of Me Can't Fly", or perhaps a sorrowful ending to wrap up the theme since the track is deployed for a cutscene specifically? regardless, you did AMAZING capturing the storyline; amazing job!! ^_^