amazingly done, incorporating songwriting into your project! it's a delight to have an actual song pop up in a soundtrack, as there's so much meaning you can also convey through written lyrics. i am enamored with your choice of vocal mixing, it's fascinating to have them not stand out too much from the rest of the mix. :3c
the genre you picked for this song works so well with the story you envisioned for your project, of course! amazingly done. i hope you continue to keep on songwriting with this under your belt. keep it up!