the drastic change partway through at 1:05 was a beautiful touch! your melody writing worked very well for this — i love the slight tinge of melancholy that accompanies the driving rhythms, which works with the idea of whether or not our poor protagonist will be able to taste freedom again. :0
i'd love to see even more vibrancy and energy shifts in the upbeat section... such as a bridge with chord progression changes? regardless, you did well juxtaposing two different feels to hint at the storyline of your project's concept. great job!