The second one is also my favourite ahah, it really captures this youth rebel tone you were looking for, very catchy.
I'm a bit less convinced by the first one even if I enjoy the funky groove aspect of it, but the loops are a bit repetitive (the scratch mostly maybe). The third one is very different, I love the melody though but maybe a bit too different. It's cool that you took some risks and that you explored unusual genres :) well done !
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Thank you for the feedback, i agree the first track is a bit repetitive, i think the vision was just a simple looping track for like a main menu or something, but looking back on it maybe i could've expanded on the idea a bit more.
I totally understand the criticism of the third track being so different, and that was my main worry when making it. The problem is that contextually story-wise, the first two are a lot closer together earlier on while the third ones possibly much farther in the story, so the big leap in genre and emotion is a bit strange.
If there was more time I would have liked to flesh out the story to create a smooth transition from those upbeat songs to something heavier and emotional.
Thanks so much for listening :)