i was super curious to see what the organ intro would lead into... the main instruments' appearance immediately kept me magnetized! the choice of a slightly dissonant harmony in 1:47–2:02 is intriguing; i think harmonic dissonance can be hard to work with, but given the theme of breaking free from a cult, i can potentially see it working in your favor! ^o^
i'd love to see the organ used more fully, such as having background chords or harmonies when the organ has solo sections!