Merci! Thanks a ton for the feedback, indeed with 7/8 hours to work on this I didn't have time for much as I'm still a really beginner (it's my third composition ever and started only last year learning a bit about music). But I'm happy that I got the gist of what I wanted. Almost feels more like a trailer than anything ahaha
Thanks again for the sweet workds, really appreciate you going through what I wrote too, I know it's work but I think it does help a bit understand what I wanted to make of it! Cheers!