This certainly made for an interesting listen! Not often you come across vocal pieces in a jam, so major kudos for the full commit. Quirky ballad, and I found myself combing through the track a few times to get the picture. Maybe throw up the lyrics on Soundcloud or on the page itself?
Solid entry as a whole, kept me guessing as the piece progressed and all in all quite a memorable track. I recall your entry from last summer - Picnic at Maple Pier. I still listen to On the Pier Under the Stars on occasion!