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You're very welcome! I'm glad I was able to help! And, I think that's a good idea. In my own opinion, I think we're far enough into the story now that it'd work with the plot to have the H-scenes be a little more graphic. Of course, not immediately jumping from 0 to 100, but a little more would work now! And as for going part-time on your real job to invest more time in Between Humanity, I hope that works out for you! Because that'd be awesome! I'm happy for you, man!

One last thing. I wanted to emphasize on this in my initial review, but I couldn't find a way to do it without ruining the "short, sweet, and effective" vibe I was going for. But, I really like how you expanded a bit more on Michael in this chapter. You gave him, and by extension, Simon, some much needed depth and character. Until now, Michael Collins, while certainly a good guy, hasn't been much more than a personality-less vessel for the player, and Simon a generic "protagonist's friend." Enjoyable characters, sure! But nothing at all like Orion Richards and Chang Wong from Eternum, or Kei and Shu from My Bully is My Lover. Simon, until chapter 3, was just a guy who talked to Michael occasionally, and Michael, just some guy who acted as a voice for the player. No real personality of his own. That seems to be beginning to be different in chapter 3! And I like how you're developing Michael and Simon to be their own characters now! 

Because, at the end of the day, and this is just my opinion, the most important character is the main character. If the main character is bland, the rest of the game will also be bland. That's one of two reasons why I just could not get into Ripples. Jack, the main character of Ripples, had no personality, and Ripples also took the "graphic right out of the gate" route with it's H-scenes, which I've already made my opinion games that do that clear. And I just... couldn't do it. I couldn't keep playing past the first 30 minutes, and I'm surprised I lasted even that long. I detest Ripples. I see it as an insult to Eternum and My Bully is My Lover when it gets put in the same tier as them. It's nothing like those games. Eternum, My Bully is My Lover, and Between Humanity are gold games. Ripples is below corroded copper.

Anyway, I'm getting off track here. What I'm trying to get at is, I appreciate you giving Michael more development, which by extension, gives Simon more development! I think if they keep getting the kind of development they got in chapter 3, they could be like Orion and Chang, or even Kei and Shu! So, keep it up! :D