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I was really happy to see the current release.

The content that's there is nice. :-)

However, there was nothing about why Lilith got kidnapped!
The end of the second version has this big cliffhanger about her being back, implying there's going to be something significant next time.... and NOTHING is revealed!
Wtf man... why no narative payoff???

The only thing related in .31 is our green eyed classmate stateing the obvious... Lilith is closed off! :-(

Another point: The MC should be telling everyone there are kidnpapers running around their neighborhood!

Even if the police are worthless and even if the corps do whatever they want, telling everyone could get the local neighborhood watch in gear to shoot the kidnappers if they ever show up again!

Hiding this fact doesn't help anyone and possibly endangers more people in the future! :-O

DebatingPanda182 days ago

Hey there!

Glad you enjoyed it so far! You're right, there was no big reveal, but that's also what I was going for. You're getting help to figure stuff out, if you accept it. But also, who says that MC didn't just fantasize about the kidnapping? On the other hand, it wasn't in the neighborhood but in the city (he gets driven there by Jane in Chapter 2, where you can see that it's at least some miles away from their home) so yeah.

But I like that most people just have their own opinion about the story, makes it really interesting to read speculations :D

Hope I could give at least some different perspective on MC's behavior :)´

Have a great day!

wwdragon180 days ago(+1)

ah you are going for a slow burn...

There are plenty of clues before this that it's not just a halucination; the things other people say in the last two version make it pretty obvious that at least some of the events are real.

Ah I missed the part that they get a ride to that place that the assault happened.

I'm still looking forward to see what happened!
I hope we get some progress soon; it's very suspensful!

Thanks for the info! :-)

DebatingPanda180 days ago

Yes, I don't want my story to be a quick shot, that'd not be my type. :) People who pay attention will get rewarded for sure ;) I'm obviously not spoiler the story, I'm just telling what the story has shown so far but I assume, with a keen eye, you can tell what's going on. I'm still planning the new chapter, since I wanted to go for smaller releases now to not make everyone wait so long. Due to that, a bigger reveal might just happen in 0.5 rather than 0.4. Will see about that, nothing fixed at the moment! :)

wwdragon180 days ago(+1)

*nods* I understand.

I think the smaller releases is a good idea; easier to keep the game in mind when we play it more often.

That said, I tend to forget the small details in between releases, due to following a lot of games all at once.

DebatingPanda180 days ago

Yeah, that's absolutely fair about forgetting the small things. Might need to add some sort of history app with important things to keep in mind, but that's just an idea I had right now. For now I'll just continue like I did before but with the goal of smaller releases with enough content. Maybe even like 0.3.2, 0.3.3, 0.3.4... where people can skip like 3 iterations, but it would still have everyone keep the girls from BH in mind when they see the image or announcements :) Nothing fixed, though.

wwdragon179 days ago(+1)

*thumbs up*

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