So Far, I am liking what I see. Personally, given the list of characters, More should have happened with Lucy already, but that's just me. I prefer when the main girl in the MC's life is the first one he gets with.
That's really my only criticism so far. I am liking what little bit of story there is so far. Judging by the pace of the story, and the time between updates, I guess we're looking at a really long time to story completion? It'll be hard to wait, because Insanity10k is right, this is shaping up to be something on the level of Caribdis' works. Don't rush, but please hurry. I'm getting tired of finding all these early masterpieces and having to wait forever to get anywhere with them. (Even Caribdis is taking too long with Eternum)
HAHA. Nicely done. Keep it coming.