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I do plan on enjoying more, and excited for what comes up next! I will admit, some of the stuff I mentioned were more personal things, but I still stand by what I said for Jiro. If you intended for him to be silly and not actually a rapist, you might need to work on it.

Where I'm coming from, is that the two love interests who are shown again and again capable of taking care of themselves, are absolutely terrified of this man, to the point they're actively trying to escape him every chance they get. And he makes it very clear of what he wants, and starts chasing them to the point of the two having to hide from him. Absolutely nothing about Jiro suggest or comes off as him not being serious. Now if it were like he'd say a creepy thing, and got a smack for it, that'd show it more humorous. But no, it's just reactions of horror, and Rene and Finn have to call him out on it.

I will admit I have an extreme heavy bias against this trope, but it seems a little more extreme version

Polar Cake107 days ago(+2)(-1)

If that's the case, in the next update, I plan to rewrite that part a bit. After the incident with rajiv, Finn goes to help and convinces Jiro. Then Jiro will apologize and show a bit more of his better side. Do you think that sounds good?

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Polar Cake107 days ago(+1)

That’s because I had some issues with the CGs...Finn was supposed to look bigger, but the scenes kept getting messed up, and I changed his size a few times. Those things aren’t that big, haha…

Apple22107 days ago(+1)(-1)

That definitely sounds like a plan!

Polar Cake107 days ago(+2)

Thanks so much for your comment! I actually have a great plan for that part now, even Tome will be involved, and there’ll be more emotional scenes between him and Mert!! Don’t forget to check out that part again in the next update! 💝

Polar Cake57 days ago

Hi, I hope you’ve read the new update. I finally made a few small changes, and I think it’s better now... thanks to you.

Your comments have always meant a lot to me and really influenced the game. I don’t know if you’re doing okay or if you’ve just lost interest in the game, but thank you❤

This message is also for a few of the older fans who used to always leave comments, but haven’t shown up in this update...

Apple2257 days ago(+1)

I want to say, I'm so thankful to see the edit, it makes it feel a bit better! Also really nice to see a dev take a bit of criticism, and improve!!! I will admit I may have gone over the top, and I apologize for that. It's just that it felt really jaring to suddenly see. Thoroughly enjoying everything in this new update, added all my favorite things to enjoy even more!!! Always love seeing the boys interact and being cute! Can't wait to see more, and learn about why the white dog(forgot his name, sorry) is so obsessed with Finn. While I think he's cute design wise, holy shit is he nuts(not a complaint btw, he's just caught my eye).

I've been reading since the beginning, and have no intention to get off this ride anytime soon!!! Whenever I see an update drop, I go ahead and read it the second I can! Even with what I said in the past, I am enjoying this story with my whole heart, and always excited to see what's in store for this story!!!

P.s. might be weird to suddenly bring up, but will the girls be more involved in the story? Cause I kinda feel bad for them cause they came together, and Finn sorta ditched them after the first day(that, and I wanna see how they react to what the hells going on, especially with how Finn is suddenly finding himself in a throuple with some more guys possibly being interested in him)

Polar Cake57 days ago

I’m really happy to hear all this, I was really looking forward to your comment and thoughts. Feedback means a lot to me!

As for the girls, they don’t show up for now, but they’ll play a key role in the critical parts of the story!!

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