I just came across a contrediction (I can't spell it) in your story. There's a line when Pearl and her mom are at the mall that she says. "I would have never thought you would let me wear these." The way the line sounds, it makes it like her mom doesn't want her to wear revealing outfits. However, at home Pearl wears a shirt that basically screams "I don't care if my family sees my breasts!" I think this is kind of funny. I am enjoying the game though.