Noticed a few misspellings.
1) Just after getting Meloetta out of the theater, in the paragraph that starts with "Meloetta stretches her arms above her head" the sentence "you managed to make it all the way out with her manic fans noticing" should have a without in it to make it "make it all the way out without her fans noticing".
2) In the part with Meloetta after the questions at the paragraph that starts with "You hope so, Meloetta's tits" the part is "she'll be carrying one these babies" the one should be "once".
3) When the MC meets Jasmine again at the festival at the paragraph that starts with "You think your Girls might get a bit jealous" the part that says "you have your hands from her ass" the have should be "move".
4) On same page as previous correction the section begins with "I should be able to fit my dress" the part says "but it make take me" the make should be "may"
5) When the MC meets Liza at the festival the section is at "Thank Arceus for that, Tate fucked off one I started" The one should be "once).
6) On same page with Liza as previous correction At part that says "You'd have though Liza of all people" the though should be "thought".
7) Same page as previous with Liza at the part that says "then again, it's full of babies, I should be sleeping on it anyway" the should can be "should not" or "shouldn't".
What did you think of my idea of Eunuch being involved in the Pecharunt idea I posted 8 days ago Chainsaw? It would be very funny.