I really enjoyed your entry! The 2-bit artstyle was unique and extremely well made, and the music was amazing and immersive. Along with the story, it was all expertly executed! I really would've liked to continue reading, but it stopped at part 9 (not sure if it was a browser display error or just the end of the Nanoreno entry). Still, I hope you make a full version with an interconnected overall story, the setup and characters were amazing.
Great job! I will browse through your collection in the future.