Thanks to you reposting this on your tumblr, I could read it for the first time, and I love it so far!
I had a couple of errors though, sadly.
These are typos and minor issues.
But then after the garm fight, at least if fighting it with strength, I couldn't get past the decision about what to do with Fri (I picked to heal him, but it happens with all three options):

And I can actually continue - once I click "ok", I can't click on the choice anymore, so I'm stuck on that page.