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I can't say too much since your game is in such an early stage of development, but I do have 2 quick suggestions:


1) Pay attention to your grammar and spelling. The sentence that starts "[Playername], Thus begins ..." should be "Thus begins . . . ,[Playername]. Also, "Are'nt" needs to be changed to "Aren't".

2) When the player first starts the game in their house, the camera/screen should be centered on the main character so it's more obvious as to who moves.

Hi! 

Thank you for your feedback. We really appreciate it. :)