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Champion of the Brave

A topic by Bjaderist created Mar 13, 2020 Views: 154 Replies: 2
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https://bjaderist.itch.io/legend-of-the-brave-alpha-v001

Hi Fellow members and fellow jadeists,
We have just released this as a demogame as a starting point of our journey along this path. We sincerely hope that you are able to take abit of your time to try out this game.We do welcome any feedback so that we are able to improve further to entertain.
ABOUT THE GAME
This game is about an adventurer(you) wanting to become the best adventurer there is. You will meet many challenges, recruit different allies and complete quests on your journey to be the best! Travel with your companions or by yourself. This adventure is up to the player's choice. 
Face different classes of enemies ranging from warriors to mages. Enemies and allies will try to influence you to join their cause. It is all up to you. You decide how your adventure starts and how it ends. 
FUTURE

In the coming updates, there will be two entities trying to ask you to join their cause. Accept or reject their invitations will have repercussions so choose wisely :) 


We hope you enjoy the game. If you do not, please leave a feedback so that we know where we had gone wrong and improve. 


Sincerely,
BJaderist

I can't say too much since your game is in such an early stage of development, but I do have 2 quick suggestions:


1) Pay attention to your grammar and spelling. The sentence that starts "[Playername], Thus begins ..." should be "Thus begins . . . ,[Playername]. Also, "Are'nt" needs to be changed to "Aren't".

2) When the player first starts the game in their house, the camera/screen should be centered on the main character so it's more obvious as to who moves.

Hi! 

Thank you for your feedback. We really appreciate it. :)