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I love the writing and word play, as well as the characters and pov shifts! The worldbuilding and lore are also so interesting! Tldr: I'm obsessed. 


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I was having issues accessing the two options to submit bug reports, so I hope this works!


When selecting the first dialogue option here, several errors pop up on the following page:






Also! I noticed that the intro of the game is filled with lore that is organically dispersed throughout the text. As a reader, I was overwhelmed with the new lore before I got my footing as my character. I wonder if it would be possible to put that lore somewhere as reference material in the menu/stats page vs as a prologue to the prologue. 

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omg thank you so much <3 I really appreciate that you’re enjoying it. I’ll go fix the bug. I was messing with that way too much last night and should have left it alone.

Funny enough, the feedback I got before was not enough lore and now it’s too much. Striking that balance for folks has been hard for me. I’ll keep that in mind as I continue writing, but in full transparency I likely will not change the way it’s set up now, mostly because the new version serves as an opening for the entire series.

thank you again <3

edit: bug has been fixed! 

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yes!! That's totally your right as the creator of the world, and I'm excited to see what you craft next!