Not bad for a demo. There were definitely some parts that could use some improvement. I think the main plus side was the art.
- A lot of minor grammar mistakes and some spelling was off. For example, I noticed 'longer' was spelled as 'loger' in one of the dialogues.
- The hint that was supposed to help with the puzzle/code to get back into your room was sort of worded oddly (like the "blue keeps").
- No 'exit game' button in the main menu?
- It's a bit confusing for there to be no running when there's an option for "auto-dash" in the options (I think this is just a default menu option for RPG Maker).
(yes, I know that there is a fully-released Chapter 1-2 already out. Don't get me wrong, I love what you do, but I'm just not sure if it's worth buying and whether or not these issues have already been addressed.)