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Yeah I secretly like the old prologue better as well. It was a bit unhinged but I liked it. Objectively - the new one is more solid, more realistic. It's a better-built house. It's a fine line, walking between realism and intrigue - keeping my own flimsy design or listening to others. If I'd kept the old prologue, the whole story might have felt like it balanced on a barely tenable concept. It might have become a problem, or might not have.

The basics of the new prologue were kindly suggested to me, and I am thankful for it, even if it is a departure from the original plot.


With how I usually do things, often I can't really vocalise exactly why I'm doing what I'm doing. In my own way, I think I can make them work, though. I'm not the sort of person who has a grand plot on the drawing board before I start writing the first bit of narrative. I make it up as I go.


I do have lots of things planned for this story, and lots of assets already made for Chapter 3.

I take your criticisms with open eyes and a bit of nodding in agreement, but we're moving forward from what things are now :)

Oh you saw the jellyfish in the chair, did you? I tip my hat to you! Did you notice other things, I wonder?


Some questions will be answered, but not all.

Thanks for reading :)