Nice and pretty original entry!
Pros:
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Good approach to the theme, where you have to walk around your environment and analyze it.
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Tutorial panels, always a plus!
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You clearly set the objectives of the game with the top-right panel.
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The narrative is definitely the highlight—it creates a sense of mystery and really helps immerse the player in the game. There are surprise moments, and the universe feels alive. Really, really great job!
Cons:
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I found the first music track very repetitive, which made it difficult for me to get into the game at the beginning. However, I preferred the second one.
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Visually, it’s not very rich, but since you worked on this alone, it’s understandable, it’s not easy to do everything.
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I didn’t understand the purpose of the multiple empty rooms.
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I felt pretty lost at the end of Chapter 5. Up until then, I was used to having a clear objective, but in Chapter 5, I couldn’t figure out what to do and wasn’t able to finish it.
Anyway, even though I pointed out some "negative" aspects, that doesn’t mean your game is bad at all. You clearly have something original in mind, with a narrative that works really well. I was surprised to get emotionally involved in it! So yeah, you can definitely be proud of what you’ve create, great job, and keep up the good work! 😃